i'd like to see some color... i think monochromatic was what you were going for...but just one accent/highlight color would help...the design's solid, but it doesn't suck you in. if not color: maybe a picture? some lineart? icons...? it's missing something.
also: have somebody fine tune your grammar, spelling, and content. it sounds rather like you're in high school or college -- perhaps you could talk an instructor into helping you out. maybe you have a very literate friend... the most critical impression is the first impression, and a well-written, professional looking site will get loads more respect and repeat visitors that one w/ 2 or 3 obvious spelling or grammar errors. (hint: watch out for your usage of the words 'than' and 'then'.)
<FONT COLOR="#800080" SIZE="1">[ March 03, 2002 08:28 PM: Message edited 1 time, by Auxcrinier ]</font>