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Hey,

 

i bought a new skiing pants ( picture, the bleu one ) but i don't know which coat i should take with that. I saw the new gray from volcom he is really expansive so i will probably take the black one from DC shoes even if it's not my fav. 

(don't answer it's just a exercice for my english class).

post #2 of 9
Grade C
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Grade C


You are too easy a grader.

post #4 of 9

DC and Volcom both suck.

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Grade C


Oh, dear.  I give it a marginal D.

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You are too easy a grader.

I was trying to go easy on a newcomer. Plus my German has an uneven quality, so who am I to be picky, when they've admitted English isn't their language? We've some people on here who think English is their first language and couldn't prove it by me.
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Marking depends on level, for a first attempt without much training the English is good.  Correct contractions.  A little problem with articles (to be expected).  Is the coat too expansive (too big), or too expensive (too much$$$$)? ;) 


Edited by Ghost - 9/29/15 at 6:18am
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Marking depends on level. For a first attempt without much training, the English is good.  The contractions are correct.  A little problem with articles is to be expected. Is the coat too expansive (too big), or too expensive (too much $$$$)? ;)

 

FIFY. I'll excuse the dollar signs as an internet colloquialism, and just give you a B. (And no, I'm not positive I have everything correct either. ;))

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Marking depends on level. For a first attempt without much training, the English is good.  The contractions are correct.  A little problem with articles is to be expected. Is the coat too expansive (too big), or too expensive (too much $$$$)? ;)

 

FIFY. I'll excuse the dollar signs as an internet colloquialism, and just give you a B. (And no, I'm not positive I have everything correct either. ;))


Thanks for fixing the typo.  If it were an English assignment, I would have proofread it myself.  I claim poetic license on the sentence fragments.:D 

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